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PostSubject: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/22/2011, 8:36 am

Character Template

General Information

Name: Senju, Jurei
Alias: Jiyuu (Jun)
Age: 17
Village: Kumogakure on Sato

Appearance:

  • Head/Shoulders/Skin:


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  • Back/Waist/Hips:


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  • Arms/Hands/Lower Torso:


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  • Clothing/Hair:


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  • Accesories:


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Personality:

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Clan Information

Clan Name: Senju
-Bloodline Description: Wood Manipulation
The members of the Senju clan posses the unique element of Moukton, or wood; however, they are also known as one of the two clans that can control fully released Bijuu, the other being the greatly famed power of the Uchiha.

Village: Konohagakure no Sato - Village Hidden in the Leaves
Clan Symbol:

Clan Traits:

-Elemental Trait: Mokuton
-Primary: Long, Black Hair
-Secondary: Pale, or White Skin (Burns easily)
-Tertiary: Colorless or Black eyes, usually somewhat large

Special Characteristics/Abilities:

-Primary: Mokuton

The main trait of the Senju is the legendary element they posses; Mokuton, or wood. Over years, this element has been perfected with many other jutsu and is renowned through out the world, and indeed this trait was what was used to make Konoha's landscape. To posses Mokuton, members of the Senju clan have both earth and water elements, with Mokuton as a third. This element opens up a whole new range of jutsu to the Senju, and is the main attribute of the clan.

-Secondary: Bijuu Control

Those who are extremely skilled in the use of Mokuton are often able to fully restrain and control a Bijuu, one of the nine beasts made purely of chakra that can turn the tide of the war with a single blow. To be able to fully control a Bijuu, people of the Senju clan must have mastered a wide range of high ranking jutsu, not to mention have huge recourses of Chakra and endurance.

Secret Clan Jutsu:

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  • B Rank:

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  • A Rank:

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History:

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Ninja Information

Rank: Jonin
Skill Specialties:
-Main: Medical Ninjutsu
-Sub: Ninjutsu
Elemental Affinity:

-Dominant: Doton
-Recessive: Suiton
-Advanced: Mokuton

Special Characteristics:


Name: Canine Whisperer
Rank: C
Description: Basically, Jurei has the ability to connect with, and to communicate with a group of specific animals. Though this ability is still in its infancy, Jurei has improved it by a lot since she was a Genin. The specific group of animals, as previously stated, is of the following: Domestic Dogs, Forest Foxes, Coyotes, and Artic Foxes
Special Effects: As a result of being able to communicate with animals, Jurei can often enlist their help and gather information through the animals. Basically, its near impossible to perform a surprise attack, considering that shes constantly gathering information from the animals around her.

Name: Calm
Rank: D
Description: As the title states, Jurei almost never freaks out or becomes nervous when something is going terribly wrong. Somehow, she maintains an almost constant and monomatic air of serenity and posture. Though, if she ever see's someone abusing an animal or a child, she will often go into a short frenzy, attacking that person relentlessly until they either run away, die, or apologize.
Special Effects: While in the frenzy, she gains a higher stature of speed, which makes her a bit difficult to hit. Also, because of the adrenaline, any hits or injuries she recieves during her frenzy won't affect her until after she comes back to normal.

Jutsu


Clan Jutsu

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  • B Rank:


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  • A Rank:


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Academy (E-D) Jutsu

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Suiton Jutsu

  • C Rank


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  • B Rank


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Doton Jutsu

  • C Rank


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  • B Rank


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  • A Rank


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Medical Jutsu

  • C Rank


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  • B Rank


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  • A Rank


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Weapon/Items

Name: Saikao
-Quantity 1x
Type: Sword/Katana
Rank: D
Description: A basic katana, with intricate designs. Its unusually different from other swords or katana's, because the engravings glow. Originally, it was thought to be the chakra metals laced into the steel, but it was later found out that the glowing was actually a strange strand of a metal called Rubidium. When heated up with a living body (or fire/heat), it tends to give off either a red or purple glow. Along the sides of the blades, small particles of the rare metal can be seen in the design of her clan.
Special Abilities: N/A

History/Rp Sample

History:

  • Birth Arc


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  • Academy Arc


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  • Genin Arc


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  • Chuunin/Jounin Arc


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RP Sample:

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-Above-
::RP Sample taken from Narutor.org, as Hinoko Kuroi, Jonin of Hoshigakure::


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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/22/2011, 10:10 am

to many jutsu. Please delete some until you get to 25 jutsu. i think that you have about 30 something.

change your title from kirigakure jonin to Kumogakure jonin

For your weapons, i shall leave that for another mod to come in and check it out.

since you only have medical and ninjutsu, your weaponry skills are going to be lower then anyone that has weaponry or taijutsu will be better at fighting up close.

Just saying. Not trying to bash the character.

your sc "CALM" seems like it would be better if it was just a personality, not an actual special characteristic.

if another mod feels differently, they can come in and disagree. but to me, it seems more of a personality then a SC.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/22/2011, 11:30 am

As long as Wanizame authorises it, Ally can be a Kirigakure Jonin; he'll need to say wether or not thats fine. However, I notice in this, you have put your village as Kumogakure, yet your title as Kirigakure. Which one are you going for?

Due to the fact you don't specialise in Kenjutsu, you can't have a B ranked sword; also, 'weapon' isn't officially a category of weapon.

I agree with Andy, calm could simply be a personality type, however as it's D rank, it doesn't count towards your total SC limit, so it's completely up to you.

Also, all starting Special Characteristics must be C rank or under. If you wish, keep your SC in a word file, and then register it in the appropriate section upon approval.


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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:29 pm

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to many jutsu. Please delete some until you get to 25 jutsu. i think that you have about 30 something.

I have 25 exactly. Please try counting next time...

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change your title from kirigakure jonin to Kumogakure jonin

Done.

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your sc "CALM" seems like it would be better if it was just a personality, not an actual special characteristic.

Not a personality trait at all. Contributes to decision making, commanding a team, and various other minor abilities. Affects her battle style indirectly...

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As long as Wanizame authorises it, Ally can be a Kirigakure Jonin; he'll need to say wether or not thats fine. However, I notice in this, you have put your village as Kumogakure, yet your title as Kirigakure. Which one are you going for?

Kumogakure Jounin. I got permissions from you already.

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Also, all starting Special Characteristics must be C rank or under. If you wish, keep your SC in a word file, and then register it in the appropriate section upon approval.

I'll do whatever, as long as my app gets approved soon. But all the SCs have to start at C-rank or under? That's a really stupid rule you conjured up. Makes no sense at all...

A B rank SC is actually below average for a Jounin. So perhaps you should regulate that rule to specific ranks, rather than all Ranks. I would understand not being allowed to have an A-rank spec, but nothing over C, for a Jounin? -___-" Dumbbbb...

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Due to the fact you don't specialise in Kenjutsu, you can't have a B ranked sword; also, 'weapon' isn't officially a category of weapon.

I'll change it then. Though, it would help if you provided a list of categories along with the app...



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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:36 pm

Well, I believe in the weapon template, examples such as 'Sword' etc are provided.
Also, the SC rule is to encourage training and Role Playing here at N.N. I'm a kage, and all my specs are C rank. You can have them, but it's to make people want to train things here, and thus get RP practice.
And of course, you have my permission for Kumo Jônin.
Also, your weapon seems quite powerful for D rank. A normal Katana is C rank, and although your one just glows, that is still conducting Chakra in some way, so I can't really approve it.


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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:39 pm

Edited the Weapons Section
Edited the SC's Section

And... your SC Rule actually discourages me from posting. Its more like a pain in the ass. \:<
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:42 pm

Winged Blade wrote:
Also, your weapon seems quite powerful for D rank. A normal Katana is C rank, and although your one just glows, that is still conducting Chakra in some way, so I can't really approve it.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:44 pm

It does not conduct chakra.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:49 pm

It says that if it is heated with chakra, it will begin to glow, it may not be the same as conducting, but it's a special ability including a certain weapon and chakra working in harmony. I see that as over D ranked. Maybe that's just me; can I have another moderator or administrators opinion?
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:55 pm

-Sigh- Heated with body temperate then. .-.;

The only thing the liquid does is glow. It can't conduct chakra.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:57 pm

Edited Weapons Section...
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 12:59 pm

Very well then, I guess that's acceptable. Sorry about that, I know it's hardly a huge advantage to have a chakra glowing sword, but I just don't see it as D rank. Anyway, thanks for being co-operative.

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 1:01 pm

Uh huh...

Do I get accepted now? o3o;
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 1:01 pm

We just need another staff member to double check the app. I'll ask Mr. Sinister or Andy.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 1:07 pm

Oky doky then. I'll be waitin'~ <3
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Jurei [Kumogakure Jonin]   12/23/2011, 1:29 pm

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