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PostSubject: Kyoki Akuma    12/17/2011, 6:56 am

General Information

Name:Kyoki Akuma
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Age:18
Description:
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Kyoki's hair is a much more vibrant shade of red, almost like fire. Her eye's are charcoal black and they glow red in certain light.Her style of clothing tend to be, loose and easy to move about in but slightly revealing.Her wardrobe consists of only red,black and white clothing.Kyoki tends to wear skirts but will wear pants as well on occasion.

Her right arm has a jagged scar from the wrist to the inside of the elbow, from where she purposely cut herself.She also likes to wear lots of leather belts and collars, usually wears at least one of each when going out.She wears her head band tied around either her left leg or her right arm.

Personality:Kyoki is fiery and passionate. She is an outcast among the village so though it's not shown on the surface, Kyoki is very lonely.She is a bit crazy due too her seclusion but overall a decent person.She respects no one besides her sensei, and unless forced into submission won't take orders either.

She tends to train a lot since she is always alone.A tad violent and easily enraged, Kyoki tends to break things often.Though she does have a soft side, but only towards people that she can trust, or befriend.She is also very blunt, if she has something to say she will say it.


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Village:Kiri
Ninja Rank:Genin
Skill Specialities:Ninjutsu
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Elemental Affinity:Fire
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Last edited by Kyoki on 12/21/2011, 6:59 am; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: Kyoki Akuma    12/21/2011, 6:23 am

Hey there Kyoki; this application looks quite nice overall, just a few creases you need to iron out.
First, I'd like to see a few more lines on your appearance. It seems to be quite high quality, but I feel you could add a few extra lines to make it that bit better.
Also, in all your jutsu, it seems you've missed the 'Chakra cost' section. Please add that on to your jutsu; the canon jutsu costs should be attached to the canon jutsu, which can be found in the canon jutsu section in the library.

Other than that, this looks quite good. I'd be happy to approve this, once the appropriate changes are made.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyoki Akuma    12/21/2011, 7:00 am

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyoki Akuma    12/21/2011, 7:04 am

Thanks for making the appropriate changes. By the power invested in me by Forummotion, I declare this application half approved:

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PostSubject: Re: Kyoki Akuma    12/21/2011, 7:12 am

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