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 Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)

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PostSubject: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/4/2012, 3:50 am



General Information


Name: Uchiha Kazuya
Alias: Legacy
Age: 20
Village: Kirigakure
Appearance:
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Personality: Kazuya is generally a composed ninja, though occasionally he can act with coldness and hostility sometimes. Kazuya is a gentle person though appears otherwise. Due to his childhood, he builds barriers around himself rather than opening up to Taiga when they first got to know each other. Yet despite this, he has a kind heart, longs to protect his teammates and will never betray the one he holds dear (Yukia).

As a child, Kazuya was a quiet and gentle boy, to the limit where Blood questioned whether or not he was even capable of being a true ninja. Kazuya is a tsundere ninja, he sports a scary aura that makes most of the students wary of him. However, his innate nature is to protect his teammates, and his cold attitude towards those he loves is likely to push them away and keep everyone at a distance. He also happens to be a stickler for details, as he doesn't consider himself as an adopted son of Hwoarang's family with Yukia. Sometimes when people mess with him or take him on like a baby, Kazuya will grab his opponent and squeeze him like a teddy bear.

Kazuya acts like the boss around kids younger than him. He will do things like tell them to shut up or put a Genjutsu on them so they wont be able to get out of it. When he is with adults, Kazuya will ask them if they are retired ninja's. If they are he will know the he does not stand a chance against them but if there not he will walk away saying behind his breath "I am 7 years old and I am stronger than a 50 year old, classic *laughs*". When Kazuya is around his comrades, he with always are them for a battle because he is very competitive. Last but certainly not least, when he is around the Kage, Kazuya will be repectful to him/her and always kindly request for a mission because the more the missions, the fast I will become a Jonin.

When Kazuya is battle he like to wait for the opponent to come rather then him going to the opponent. Hydra often uses his Taijutsu unless the opponent is a Genjutsu type. If the opponent is a genjutsu type of Ninja, Hydra uses sneak up attacks so he does not get caught in the Jutsu.

Likes:
His Comrades because he believe that he needs to protect them at all times and will never let them leave on a mission alone and they respect him.
The Kages because he knows that if he asks politely, they will let him go on missions and same with his Comrades, they respect him.
Fighting people because when he fights people, he gets stronger and gets closer to ranking up everytime he fights.
Doing Missions because when he does missions he knows that the Kage will give him a chance to become Genin, to Chuunin and so on.
Exams because when he does Exams, if he passes he Ranks up and when he ranks up, he does harder missions.
Ramen because he loves the taste of those delicious noodles.

Dislikes:
Losing in Fights because when that happends, he will be taken away from Ranking up or getting stronger.
Sleeping because while he is sleeping, there might be a kidnapper from another villiage or a blackout that will need some ninja's to repair the lighting.
School because school goes for about 5 hours and he will be there when he could be training
People not taking him seriously because when that happens, he will easily win the fight.

Clan Information


Clan Name: Uchiha Clan
Bloodline/Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Special Characteristics:
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Description:
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Clan Jutsu:
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History:
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Ninja Information


Rank: Jonin
Skill Specialties:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 specialty.
-Main: Ninjutsu
-Sub: Puppetry
Elemental Affinity:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 element.
-Dominant: Katon
-Recessive: Raition
-Advanced:

Special Characteristics:


*All SC must start at C-Rank
-This can be anything that is due to your character only. This is was differs you from anyone else.
-Genin and chunnin may only start with 1 SC
-Chunnin and Jounin may start with 2 SC
-Kage may start with 3 SC

Name: Spiritual Stamina
Rank: C
Type: Chakra
Training: 600
Description: This SC is a characteristic that increases the users chakra pool. These shinobi are naturally born with an increased chakra level. They last longer in battle than others even while using jutsu recklessly. With this SC the user has a natural 15cp more shinobi of their rank.
Requirements: N/A

Name: Slightly Faster Than The Average Ninja
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Training: 600
Description: The user is slightly faster than an average ninja of their rank. When it comes to speed within this rank this user will usually win. With this the users speed is increased 10%.
Requirements: N/A

Jutsu


Academic Jutsu:
 


Clan Jutsu:
 


Katon Jutsu:
 


Raition Jutsu:
 


Kenjutsu:
 


Puppetry Jutsu:
 



Weapon/Items


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History/Rp Sample

History:

  • Birth Arc


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  • Academy Arc


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  • Genin Arc


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  • Chuunin Arc


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  • Jonin Arc


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RP Sample:

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/4/2012, 10:18 am

i think you are a little old for a genin... just saying.

you only have like 5 jutsu. would you like to put any more on there?

academy arc seems to be lacking in some length.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/4/2012, 10:21 pm

Done backlash
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/5/2012, 4:23 am

The two C rank weapon jutsu you posses are individual to Kenjutsu users; as a genin, you can only start with 1 speciality, but you can train one later. For now, at least, please remove the two C ranked Kenjutsu; the D rank can stay.

Also, I'd like to see a bit more in your appearance, two paragraphs are acceptable.

Other than that, this looks like a nice app. I'll be happy to approve it when you make said changes.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/6/2012, 1:00 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/7/2012, 5:12 am

ill go ahead and post

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/7/2012, 12:35 pm

I'm still not sure about the appearance; I don't just want you to divide the writing into paragraphs, but increase the actual amount too. A lot of power comes with the Uchiha clan, so I'd like to see a bit more effort on an Uchiha application.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/8/2012, 2:49 am

nearly done, just editting my Rp sample
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/9/2012, 4:09 am

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/9/2012, 9:56 am

The appearance still needs to be bigger, more so if you're going for Jônin now.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/10/2012, 1:29 am

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/10/2012, 10:04 am

Since you are only choosing Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, You must REMOVE all your genjutsu moves.

You advanced element makes no sense for it to be suiton. an advanced element in my mind would be something that your primary and recessive elements combine into. I could be wrong though.

Plus if i am not mistaken. ALL of your doujutsu, being Amaterasu, Tsukyomi, Susanno. Those are all special trained jutsu. You must train those in your rp. Not in story, and they are not just handed over.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/10/2012, 11:39 am

backlash07 wrote:
Since you are only choosing Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, You must REMOVE all your genjutsu moves.

You advanced element makes no sense for it to be suiton. an advanced element in my mind would be something that your primary and recessive elements combine into. I could be wrong though.

Plus if i am not mistaken. ALL of your doujutsu, being Amaterasu, Tsukyomi, Susanno. Those are all special trained jutsu. You must train those in your rp. Not in story, and they are not just handed over.


Andy's right mostly, although Suiton COULD be an advanced element, it doesn't have to be a combination of both primary and recessive. Saying this, however, a SC is required to have an advanced element. So in this case, you'll have to remove one element, as you don't posses the required SC and you can't start with it.

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/11/2012, 1:44 am

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Kazuya (Kirigakure Jonin)   2/13/2012, 10:18 am

If everything that was supposed to be edited is edited, then

I'm sticking with the

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