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PostSubject: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/22/2011, 1:59 am

Kemuri, Matsunkai (Great Tragedy Wolf)

General Information

Name: Matsunkai Kemuri
Alias: Idaina higeki ōkami (Great Tragedy Wolf), Tragedy
Age:18
Village:Kumogakure
Appearance:Matsunkai is a large body teenager, he stands at six foot three and his one hundred and seventy pounds, he is muscular and very fit, he has a scar in the shape of a star on his right pectoral and a tattoo of a chinese dragon with his maw open over his heart. His eyes were genetically altered to be the color of a bright yellow gold and be in the shape of a wolf's iris. His hair is black and waist length, it is spike at the top of his head and down his back, the tips of his hair at the end by his waist his white. His teeth are sharp like a wolf's and his nose is regular his ears are kinda perked up

His garb consist of black tabi with white cloth, his pants are also black silk but have the kanji for wolf on the pants legs in white stitching and are baggy . Around his waist his belt of leather with the clan symbol it in steel. His shirt is a white long sleeve cotton shirt on which he wears black cloak with a hood the cloak ends right underneath his butt. On the back of the cloak is the clan symbol in white stitching. He wears a black clothed crimson cloud with lightning bolt ninja headband around his neck.

Personality: Menkai is a dark individual he is not a sadistic killer but man who simply does not look at the world as a great place nor does he truly love being around people. He rarely speaks and doesn't try to make conversation. He doesn't try to be disrespectful but if he is than he doesn't care because of being spurned by the village as a child. He respects his elders but rarely does he speak mostly keeping to himself until his opinion is either asked for or needed. Matsunkai like a wolf sees being in group only if it is a necessity and when he doesn't have to be in a group he stress not being in one. Like the moon he has a dark and a light side, rarely the lightside is seen.

The ferocity of wolf, this defines the true self that is inside of Matsunkai, he strikes without thought only with instinct, only in times of great rage can he truly unleash an animal of hell bent rage that only after the target of his rage is either destroyed or is reminded of who he is by a friend of his can he truly be brought back if not, then you have unleash wolf into the world. He doesn't care that people might make fun of his village for he was spurned by them and laughed at. For this if you disrespect him or his mother in any fashion, you will ask for yourself to be the target of his rage.

Clan Information

Clan Name: Kemuri
Bloodline/Kekkei Genkai: The clans kekkei genkai is the ability to take the carbon dioxide in their body and mix it with their katon (fire) and fuuton (Wind) elements. The clan members must specialize in katon and fuuton to create smoke that can kill. The smoke is a combination of the carbon dioxide in the ninja, The ninja's chakra, and the Katon and Fuuton elements. This smoke is a thick gray color. This smoke is like cigarette smoke only thicker and can suffocate lungs of those it enters. The Clan's Member can manipulate the smoke it only takes them a few seconds to combine the carbon, chakra, and elements into smoke. Clan members have triple the amount the carbon dioxide in their bodies than that of other ninja. The clans member can only manipulate smoke they create and the smoke can only be manipulated in a five meter radius. The range extends to ten meters at chunin 15 meters at jounin and 20 meters at s-rank. Outside of the radius the smoke is harmless and not useful but if the smoke was to be reentered into radius then it can be manipulated. The smoke can be hardened so that he can grab onto people and the smoke can be made soft so that it can pass through the body.
Special Characteristics:Primary-Smoke Transportation, A clans member can transport anywhere within their smoke radius, by throwing a ball of smoke they can appear where the smoke ball was thrown. (Two per topic)
Secondary-
Description:
Clan Jutsu:

Name of Jutsu:Lighting the Fuse
Rank:B
Type:ninjutsu
Element:Smoke
Range:n/a
Description:The clan member focuses on an exact area of smoke that they want to be burn and focus on the katon chakra to make it heat up and burn where they focused.
Chakra:17 cp

Name of Jutsu: Hidden smoke wall
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Smoke
Range: Ten meters across and two meters thick and five meters high
Description: The clan member forms a wall of harden smoke of the exact measurements above and because it is made of smoke it can hide the clan member from view, the duration is for two post.
Chakra: 10cp

Name of Jutsu: Twin Smoke dragons
Rank: C-A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element:Smoke
Range: within the radius the smoke user
Description: The reason for the C-B is the size of the dragons that are created, C-rank dragons are Five meters in length and two meters in width,, B-rank the dragons are Ten meters in length and four meters across. The dragons are now twenty meters and Six meters across at A-rank. This has a direct collaboration with the lightning the fuse technique, the rank of the dragon effects the explosion size and strength. C-rank explosion range is a Five meter radius and does C-rank burn wounds (first degree), The B-rank is ten meter and does B rank burns (second degree) ,and A-rank does A-rank burns (Third degree, Lethal)
Chakra: 12(C) 18(B) 26(A)
Secret Clan Jutsu:



History:The clan origin begins with the Demon Masked Assassin, A ninja of Kirigakure who was known as the smoke demon. His name coming from his ability to disappear leaving a wisp of smoke when he leaves. The smoke demon never needed weapons he would slowly suffocate his target making his smoke fill the lungs. When he became more powerful in the manipulation of smoke he could make the smoke heat up to burn his target from the inside out. After years of assassination he retired to create a family of Assassin's made in his image with the ability kill with smoke. He had two sons, he loved and trained them in the art of killing and disappearing in smoke. When his two sons were of age and into the world of ninja he passed away of old age and his oldest son killed the younger taking the mantle of smoke demon and continuing the legacy of his father except with a added exception, the son must kill the father to become the new head of clan.

Ninja Information

Rank: Chunin
Skill Specialties:
-Main: Weponary
-Sub: Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
-Dominant:Katon
-Recessive:Fuuton
-Advanced:Kemuri (Smoke)

Special Characteristics:

Name: Stealth
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Training: 600
Description: The user is very sneaky. Their movements make little to no sound at all and stealth missions are slightly easier. They can sneak into any non government building or town. The success rate of someone with this characteristic is 30% greater than others. The only places the user cannont sneak into are villages and Government buildings.
Requirements: N/A

Name: Enhanced senses
Rank: C
Type: Physical
Training: 600
Description: The user has naturally high sense of smell, sight, hearing, touch and taste which oddly become more and more animal like. Able to see further, smell better etc then the average ninja. This ability for all of these are only slighted in increase 5%.
Requirements: N/A




Jutsu
Name of Jutsu: Jūsen Endou - Art of walking on vertical surfaces
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. By concentrating their chakra in a controlled way around their feet, the users can walk on vertical surfaces, as if gravity does not effect them.
Chakra: 2

Name of Jutsu: Issui Endou - Art of walking on water
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. By concentrating their chakra in a controlled way around their feet, the users can walk on water, as if it were a solid surface.
Chakra: 2

Name of Jutsu: Kai - Release
Rank: E - S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. By stopping their chakra flow, a Ninja under a genjutsu can expel the effects of any illusion cast on them; however, they have to spend the same amount of chakra casting this release as the illusionist used casting said illusion. Also, users must first notice that they are under a genjutsu by logical means.
Chakra: X


Name of Jutsu: Henge no Jutsu - Art of Transformation
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. This Jutsu allows the user to take the physical shape and form of another person, and can be used as a basic disguise. If a solid blow were to be landed on someone using this jutsu, then the technique would fail and the user would revert back into their normal form.
Chakra: 1

Name of Jutsu: Bushin no Jutsu - Art of Cloning
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. The user simply conjures an illusionary clone of themselves; this clone can move as directed, however, due to the fact the clone is not solid, any attacks it makes will simply pass straight through the victim. If someone were to punch the clone, the attack would pass straight through it. This clone cannot disturb the physical environment around it; for example, it can't splash water.
Chakra: 1

Name of Jutsu: Kawarimi no Jutsu - Art of Substitution
Rank: E
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Range: N/A
Description: This is one of the basic Shinobi Techniques. When a blow impacts with a Ninja, the victim of the attack simply waits, meaning the attacker may be lead to the assumption they landed the hit, before the user substitutes their body with a solid object nearby, such as a log or rock, to take the hit in place of them.
Chakra: 1

Name: Endan - Fireball
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10m
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: This technique is executed by the user gathering oil in their mouth which is created by chakra, spitting it out, and igniting it. This technique simply shoots a flame bullet at the enemy.
Chakra Cost: 10


Name: Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 5m
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Chakra Cost: 10

Name: Zukokku - Head Mincing Pain
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 m
Element: Katon (Fire)
Description: After the user spits out a small fireball that erupts into a giant firestorm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade.
Chakra Cost: 16

Name: Reppushou - Gale Wind Palm
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m), Far (10+)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: Fuuton • Reppushou is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Wind Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the user will send a strong gust of wind towards his/her target. When acting in conjunction with another thrown weapon, the wind can increase its power and deadliness.
Chakra Cost: 10

Name: Daitoppa - Great Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m - 5m), Mid (5m - 10m)
Element: Fuuton (Wind)
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame.
Chakra Cost: 11
Weapon/Items

Name: The twin wolf fist.
-Quantity 2
Type: Gauntlets
Rank: B
Description: The gauntlets are tempered as red color steel, the gauntlets start at the elbow and end with the fingers. The gauntlets have the clan symbol on each of the knuckles and the fingers. On the forearm part of the gauntlets there are wolf heads in bright silver steel.
Special Abilities:Each finger has a chain on it that is five meters in length and are black colored steel, these fingers can each be shot out of the gauntlet and be retracted as fast as it takes it to blink with both eyes three times.

History/Rp Sample

History:

  • Birth Arc


The birth of a Wolf:
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  • Academy Arc


The pup sharpens his fangs:
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  • Genin Arc


The blood moon rises:
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 3:01 am

The twin wolf fist - Would be considered A or S rank weapon.....mainly because of the blink of an eye comment....O and what's black steel? lol

Twin Smoke dragons- A-Ranked

Change the CP on all of your jutsu as I told you to on ur clan

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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 3:45 am

Twin Smoke dragons- must come off App because ur a chunnin

The twin wolf fist - ARank as well

Remove both of these
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 5:19 am

Twin wolf fist: If Scorpio were to perhaps make the chain firing slower, it might be B ranked; and I've never heard of black steel either.
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 10:29 am

Edited the wolf fist and the jutsu is C-A so I can only use C-B ranked dragons. Not a-rank dragons.
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 11:12 am

Are you sure you don't want even academy Jutsu? Their absolutely free and kind of useful, and turning down other jutsu is a bit odd.
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 11:57 am

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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 12:00 pm

Ok, with the Twin Smoke Dragon Jutsu, could you put something about what it does, more than just the size of the dragons? Also, I'm assuming that the smaller the size of the dragon, the less power? So, the C ranked dragon will do C rank wounds?
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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 12:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 12:09 pm

I no longer see any problem with this.

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PostSubject: Re: Matsunkai Kemuri [Kumo Chunin] (Finish)   12/24/2011, 12:12 pm

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