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PostSubject: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/21/2010, 10:44 pm

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sorry, i thought of it after the fact, i hope that this is okay... again, i'm sorry for the inconvenience.
Clan Information
Clan: Musashibo
Name of Bloodline: Inazuma no shinzō (Heart of Lightning)
Current Village: Unknown
Description: This clan has an unusual connection to lightning energy, and as such all specialize in lightning and water jutsu. Through their training they find more interesting ways of linking these two otherwise unwieldy elements together. Some choose to focus more heavily on one or the other, and some choose to train them equally. However all of them follow the same basic strategy. Saturate the ground and their foes with water and arc their Raitonjutsu through them. Some of the higher-up clan members have the ability to personify Lightning in it's purest form, though at great personal risk at times.
Current Members: Shinsei
Special Characteristics: Skilled at Raiton and Suiton skills, also eventually go into Ranton
Clan Secret Jutsu:
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History: Largely unknown for several decades, the Musashibo clan kept their abilities under closely guarded secrecy during the times of the Kekei Genkai Hunt. The Head of the Clan, Masakichi Musashibo, swore all of his family to an oath - on pain of death - that they would never reveal their powers. They all came under scrutiny, and most responded with a simple sentence. "I am but a Raitoujutsu master. Nothing more, nothing less." However, it was only a matter of time before the secret slipped. A group of townspeople soon found out (through a member's use of the Raijin Jutsu) that they were a little more than Raitoujutsu masters.

In response the clan was besieged on all sides by mundane townsmen, rival ninja groups, and powerful shogunate. If it had not been for the crafty idea of Masakichi to send a piece of the clan through the mountains to the south, the whole clan would have been destroyed. This however did not save as many as he would have hoped. An avalanche was caused by the townsfolk who had anticipated the flight, and in doing so had killed another quarter of the people. Enraged, Masakichi's son, Yukitane, invoked the Raijin and slew each of the murderous townspeople.

Soon after the clan escaped the Hunt ended, and Yukitane settled down in a distant land, bearing a son, Nichinaga. He in turn bore a son, Benkei, who is the current lord of the Musashibo legacy. With the death of the Hunt, the death of the law also came, and now the clan is well known for their attitude of completing the mission at all costs. However, their personal feelings on how to solve each mission understandably differs.

General Information

Name: Musashibo, Shinsei (read Last Name, First Name)
Alias: Shinichi, Tanuki
Age: 16
Description: Shinsei is the typical newly-made adult in build; thin, somewhat tall, and lithe musculature. His arms and legs are lightly toned and without any seen blemishes or scarring. As for his face he has one small scar, a thin line about an inch away from his nose and running to the middle of his left cheek. He accidentally gave himself this scar while training with a kunai where he made a rookie mistake. It forever haunts his memory as one of the more mortifying experiences he’s had.

He has red hair down to the middle of his back which is usually tied in a tight braid. His amethyst eyes are framed by small square framed glasses that rest halfway down his nose. His almost six foot frame is usually covered by an outfit consisting of a white shirt, black pants, and a red sash. The white shirt, while offering almost no oasis of vision does have a small kanji insignia on the upper left part of the front of the shirt which reads “Oni Warrior”. He prefers to wear his Village insignia as an armband.

When on a mission he wears a tight-fitting outfit that is solely black, stemming from his dedication to his missions. Diverging from the usual mission attire, however, he does not cover his face with a black shroud. He instead keeps his face open, choosing the risk that he could be recognized in a crowd. This stems from his strange quirk of liking a challenge from out of nowhere. On either shoulder he straps Kunai belts for easier access to his tools.


Personality: He is calm for the most part, but when openly criticized with no reason, he tends to get icy. First and foremost he has a dedication to his mission. He doesn’t go out of his way to alienate people, but his detached nature has lead to more than a fair share of people questioning his loyalties. He’s been known to flat out ignore people that have been talking to him while busy remembering the details of a mission at hand. He never means for it to happen, he just spaces out while attempting to focus on just one thing at a time.

When asked about his village, he remains silent with a small grin on his face. He has a great sense of duty to his village and fellow ninja, punishing himself the most when he fails them. Their well-being is a constant pull on his mind, and when faced with a group mission, he is always ready to pull support role. He tends to back down to the others around him, unless he finds that he is the right person for the job, in which case he steps forward as needed. He is always courteous, never intentionally putting his fellows down.

That being said, he also has a darker side. His temper has a long fuse, but a high volatility, sometimes landing him in hot water. He also gains a thrill from unexpected tests and challenges, such as surprise sparring matches or even surprise attacks. When he first started his duties as a shinobi he had issues killing rivals, but soon paid for his mistake with the death of a comrade. This in turn caused his first drop into his darker mood, and he constantly feels repentant for his error.


Ninja Information

Village: Kumo
Ninja Rank: Genin
Skill Specialities:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 specialty.
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub:

Elemental Affinity:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 element.
Dominant: Lightning
Recessive:

Special Characteristics:
Due to his personality, he’s more readily accepting of over-using his chakra when desperate. As such (if it’s okay) his Chakra reserve has grown slightly over time as a result of “Exercising” it for lack of a better term.

Jutsu List
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History:
Childhood
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Later Genin Years
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Now
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/21/2010, 10:48 pm

genin can only be skilled in one chakra affinity, and one jutsu type.

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Skill Specialities:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 specialty.
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub:

Elemental Affinity:
*Note: All genin may only begin with 1 element.
Dominant: Lightning
Recessive:
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/21/2010, 10:56 pm

fixed above, deleted Genjutsu and Earth from the list. sorry about that. <_<;;
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/22/2010, 12:47 am

you donot have a skill in ninjutsu, so these should be deleted.



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Name of Jutsu: Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Description: changes the appearance of a nearby object or area to disorient and mislead the opponent.



Name of Jutsu: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Description: a Genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside peoples’ hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn’t ever want to see, and this Genjutsu is a technique that draws that image forth and makes it real (to the victim).


Name of Jutsu: Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: none
Description: changes the appearance of a nearby object or area to disorient and mislead the opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/22/2010, 1:52 pm

i've added different custom jutsu from another site (details in spoiler). i hope this isn't a problem.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/22/2010, 9:31 pm

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Name of Jutsu: Lightning Step
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: User focuses lightning chakra into the feet to increase speed for a brief period, leaving behind a trail of purple sparks which may cause minimal damage.

Original Creation, again if unacceptable, will be removed. if accepted, will be posted in jutsu creation as well.
How much does it increase ur speed? Also how long does it last?

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Name of Jutsu: Raijin Needle
Rank: D (subject to change)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user focuses lightning chakra into a needle-like projectile and throws it. on contact it delivers a small jolt which can cause a body spasm, disrupting their current action in a small manner.
How fast does the jolts travel? How long does this disruption last?

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Name of Jutsu: High Tension
Rank: C (subject to change)
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: the user channels lightning chakra through his own body, tensing his muscles and increasing his physical abilities by a fair amount. the downside to this jutsu, however, is that the user taxes their system. It's also very possible that the jutsu can cause damage to the musculature of the user.
how much does this increase their physical abilities? What Physical abilities?
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/22/2010, 9:43 pm

alright, guess i learned my lesson there. sorry about that.

Lightning Step - increases speed (if you need a numerical value) by about 50% their usual speed i'll wager (doesn't need to be godly as a D rank after all.)

The jolts move only slightly faster than a normal thrown weapon, and the disruption is instantaneous and brief. it's essentially a single muscular spasm to throw them off balance.

The physical capacities increased are strength and resistance to pain, and they increase by a factor of about 30%

I hope this is sufficient information.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/22/2010, 10:30 pm

I see nothing wrong with that, doing good so far, But that is just my opinion. I think the jutsu are acceptable because they also have defaults on the user.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/23/2010, 12:40 am

OK NOW PUT WHAT U JUST SAID IN UR APP
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/23/2010, 2:02 am

Age abit high for a Genin lower it to like 15 or 16
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/23/2010, 4:47 am

u might want to list ur E-Ranked jutsu as well
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/23/2010, 9:47 am

okay, lark. though i figured it was just another thing that set him apart, he's been a genin for ages, which adds to his frustration. still, if he must be younger, then he shall be younger.


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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/24/2010, 5:22 am

you have yet to lower your age from 21 tp 15 -16 =\
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/24/2010, 8:27 am

is it really necessary? it's not like age means more powerful. and besides that age is kind of irrelevant to a ninja rank; as long as a person really hasn't had the opportunity to advance they could remain at one rank their whole life.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/24/2010, 9:10 am

yea ur right but just do it man
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/24/2010, 9:38 am

alright. having been asked so kindly, i'll change the age, then.
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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/24/2010, 6:23 pm

Eh, I approve this profile.....

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PostSubject: Re: Musashibo, Shinsei [finished, Kumo Genin]   11/19/2011, 4:47 am

Archived. Due to Village inactivity and User inactivity.
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